Love Connection?

Prompt 1

A time in my life when I acted impulsively without thinking the situation and options through was when I broke the vase in my dining room. The situation was about a couple years ago. It was three days after my brothers birthday and their was still cake. I was feeling hungry so I went to eat it. While i was sitting on my island eating the cake though, my brother came down the stairs and he saw me. I saw anger on my face that I had never seen before.

He yelled,”stop eating the cake, that’s mine”. Even with his instruction I still went on eating so he ran down the stairs and started to charge at me. Because of this I started to run around the house, through the living room, through the kitchen, through the dining room, through the family room, through the basement, down the stairs, up the stairs, and finally I reached my bedroom and I locked the door.

He was still persistent so once I entered my room he started to chase me around. Trying to slow him down I tried to pull down a chair in my dining room. While I was doing this though I tripped and fell hitting my mom’s vase. The soil and the flowers went everywhere. Most importantly the vase was shattered into pieces.

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What launched me into making me decision so quickly was the fear after I saw my brothers face after eating the slice of cake and the adrenaline rushing through my body as I ran. I had to make split second decisions or my brother would have caught up to me I didn’t have time to think everything through.

The consequences that I faced were that my parents were very angry at not just me but my brother and I got my Xbox got taken away. What I would have done instead with a second chance is I most likely wouldn’t have eaten the cake knowing all the baggage that would come with it in the future. The road not taken would probably have taken me to where the rest of my family believes that I am more responsible and less selfish.

 

Reflection 4

For my conference the grade I will be fighting for is an A because throughout the first marking period I have shown growth in writing, handed in work on time, and have performed well on words on Wednesday and these are the three biggest factors for your grade. For my conference I plan on writing a letter. I plan on writing a letter because unlike a video you don’t have to restart if you make one mistake, also unlike the face to face conference where if you mess up you have to live with it, there is always room for revision in a letter.

reflection 3

When I go and look back at the feedback I see from Mr Heidt I see that there is still a lot of work to do for my “Who am I as a Reader and Writer” pieces. The thing that Mr heidt emphasized the most in my feedback was that I needed to tie my metaphor more into my writing and this is something that he said for both pieces.Another thing that stood out in the feedback was his praise for my explanation for my strengths and weaknesses.So what I plan on doing with my writing is going back and adding dialogue that connects back to the metaphor in both pieces.

Reflection 2

The work I’ve done has helped me move closer to building a stronger relationship as a student and learner because know I have gotten to see more of my strengths and weaknesses and also set new goals form myself. An example of this is the intro to the grade-less system, as in the grade-less system instead of setting the goal of just getting work done, I know have to set the goal of putting quality work that betters me. The work I’ve done has helped me move closer to building relationships with other students in the class and develop a stronger community of readers and writers because we get to have interactions with other students that betters us and also we better them with advice and tips to their writing. An example of this is the who am I as a reader/who am I as a writer, because in this everyone get helpful advice that betters them which helps form the community of writers and readers. The thing that as worked best for me is the peer response group because I get to see voices that are non- biased towards my writing and are trying to help me better as a learner. The thing that can use improvement I the free write because you don’t really get to her others and it’s too self dependent because no piece of writing is perfect but it can become bettered through the help of others.