When I go and look back at the feedback I see from Mr Heidt I see that there is still a lot of work to do for my “Who am I as a Reader and Writer” pieces. The thing that Mr heidt emphasized the most in my feedback was that I needed to tie my metaphor more into my writing and this is something that he said for both pieces.Another thing that stood out in the feedback was his praise for my explanation for my strengths and weaknesses.So what I plan on doing with my writing is going back and adding dialogue that connects back to the metaphor in both pieces.